"Is a dream a lie if it don't come true, or is it something worse?"
Wednesday, October 31, 2007
3WW LIX
HAPPY HALLOWEEN! Hopefully, this week's words will be a treat.
Welcome to Three Word Wednesday. Each week, I will post three (or more) words. Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to write something using all of those words. It can be a few lines, a story, a poem, anything. I'll also attempt to write something using the same words.
Leave a comment if you participate. Many fun and interesting people might visit your blog.
This week's words are:
Phone
Stumbled
Windy
You never realize how ear-splitting the ringing of a phone can be until it rings in the middle of the night, piercing the formerly silent darkness and causing the mind to race and the heart to pound.
Kari fumbled around on the nightstand until she felt the phone. She didn't recognize the number. She looked at the clock. It was 2:18. She sat the phone back down.
Out wasted again, she thought to herself. Needing a ride. Or needing money for bail.
He called again. And then a third time. She fought the urge to answer, then waited for a fourth call. But it never came.
She lied awake wondering if he would get a ride, if he would have a place to sleep. A tree brushed against the house, reminding her the night was chilly and windy. The urge to give in one more time was continuous. But he had gone too far. He had pulled a knife on her. He was out of control.
Still there was no satisfaction in knowing she had made the right decision. She wasn't even sure she had. The only thing she felt at that moment was pain. Immense, unbearable, sleep-depriving pain.
Miles away, he stumbled out of a phone booth and sat down on the pavement. Out of change, tired, weary, but completely sober for nine days and twenty-two hours.
"I haven't had a drink in nineteen days. My eyes are clear and bright without that haze..."
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In this week's episode Simon seems to be in grave danger. Will he escape?
ReplyDeleteSomewhat Halloweenish.
ReplyDeleteLost in the Cemetery
Wow, I'm amazed I am posting so early this week.
ReplyDeleteRock Bottom part two
It's a continuation of my story. Will be going on for sometime
ReplyDeleteI have much going on in my personal life, so....
Happy Halloween!!!
This time it won't make ANY sense!
ReplyDeleteBut it not like last time, I promise!
click
pencil stub
or cut/paste http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2007/10/pencil-stub-3ww.html
Embarrassing, but true... here is my entry.
ReplyDeletehttp://greengrassramblings.blogspot.com/2007/10/3ww-phone-stumbled-windy.html
I love it when these random words seem to frame an idea. Anyone who has been around soccer moms will probably relate to this one. *grin*
ReplyDeleteThis is my last 3WW until December - I'm doing the NaNoWriMo thing. Keep on writing!
Be good while I'm gone, Bone. *grin*
Something's Blowing In
An attempt at scary, but turns out more funny when I read it. But here it is -
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Happy Halloween!
Hi everyone. I am back from my holiday to London and Paris and very busy working on my travel book. I am planning to write during November and have a finished book by the end of the month. Wish me luck. :)
ReplyDeleteMy story today is called "Turn Back! and is scary but not horror.
Rose
xo
Hi. Mine's up.
ReplyDeleteHere's my simple take on this prompt.
ReplyDeletePhone Stumbled Windy
Mine's posted.
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I seem to be singing the same song again! Thanks for the words Bone.
ReplyDelete3WW
Mine is up. I'll be back later to comment. Even N&S has a bit of a ghostly theme.
ReplyDelete--Gay
I wrote this at work in miniminzed windows, so I apologize beforehand for the shoddy proofreading job.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.herburban.com/?p=2451
Gautami, UL--I had screwed up my copying of the story. Apologize for that
ReplyDeletea lighter more poetic entry today... happy halloween... and look forward to sharing nanowrimo with anyone else that may have entered!!!!!
ReplyDelete"dried roses"
Here's my entry
ReplyDelete3WW
You're invited:
ReplyDelete*A Goblin's Invitation*
HAPPY HALLOWEEN BONE! :D
ReplyDeleteNanowrimo's Eve.
ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween!
Comet and Ghost Head
I tortured those three words into a limerick. :)
ReplyDeleteJoys Of Winter
Happy Halloween! I got here too early this am and you werent up with the words... now its probably too late (seeing that its Halloween and I will be up and down with candy calls! lol
ReplyDeleteI will try to get something done, or at least I will have a peek at all the others sites!
Have a great night! Not too much chocolate!
Here's my Effort after a long break.
ReplyDeletewow...lots to read...
ReplyDeletehere is mine
SeeingISaw
Wrote a poem this week. Don't know that it's much good, but wanted to do some figurative imagery.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to read yours. Can I get an advanced copy?
Sylvia's Neverland
Here's mine:
ReplyDeletehttp://havingwrit.blogspot.com/2007/10/transplant.html
and if I get this right, click
The Transplant
Life, after children's bedtime All those cute little kids tonight put me in a non scary mood, a motherly mood.
ReplyDeleteMine's finally here. Hope you had a nice day. I tried to link this time.
ReplyDelete"Prank Call"
Hope it worked.
Michelle
My Halloween offering
ReplyDeletehttp://a-mus-ing.blogspot.com/2007/10/strangers-in-night.html
Happy Halloween!!!!
Christy
Hi Everyone -- Happy Halloween! Here's a little story:
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It's late (literally for both time of day for me and for publishing), but done.
ReplyDeleteI won't be around until sometime tomorrow night to read everyone's :)
I will do a short short story for the Holiday. Happy Halloween everyone!
ReplyDeleteI had some fun with this prompt - thanks!
ReplyDeletehttp://scrunchydumpling.blogspot.com/2007/11/three-word-wednesday.html
I'm a bit late posting this, but here's my attempt:
ReplyDeleteWalking home
haha...hopefully this week will be a treat...funny bone...:) I've finally posted and am now RUNNING to class...later!
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't windy out at all- which is why I had to laugh at myself when I stumbled walking up the stairs while talking on my phone. Guess I can't multitask. :o)
ReplyDeleteArgh, did it again, posted on the previous week. OK, now I'm in the right place.
ReplyDeleteBone, I can't tell you how much I look forward to these prompts. Thanks for keeping this thing going. And thanks to all the contributors for being a part of this virtual community.
Here's mine for LIX:
JESUS AT THE SHAMROCK TAVERN
Look how popular you are!
ReplyDeleteHere is mine. I'm going to catch up on everyone else's this weekend!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for participating again this week. And thank you for reading and commenting on others. This has really become a nice little community, I think.
ReplyDeleteI'll try to be around to read everyone's soon.
I love it.
ReplyDeleteSounds very noir. Great edge
Tells a great story--and someplace many of us have been
I love how she's so intent on thinking what she knew to be the truth,
and he's living what she wanted, but in dire circumstances
*****
I will probably get to the blogs I missed on Monday--hope to be able to
Great story, Bone. I feel sorry for the guy left standard and sober, but I can understand where she is coming from too. We don't know how many times she wanted to believe in him and was let down.
ReplyDeleteAt first I was really proud of Kari for not answering that phone. So many of us have let those that we love walk all over us, time and again, each time claiming “never again.” She was actually making good on that promise, so good for her. In the end though, I ended up with as little if not less satisfaction than she did for her actions.
ReplyDeleteStill there was no satisfaction in knowing she had made the right decision. She wasn't even sure she had. The only thing she felt at that moment was pain. Immense, unbearable, sleep-depriving pain.
This was amazing, Bone. Very heartwrenchingly (I swear it’s a word!) beautiful. The ending about broke my heart, as I sat there, wishing there had been some way for the two of them to reach a happy ending that wasn’t meant to be. I could quote some cheesy 80’s song about love not being enough, but I wouldn’t do anything like that O:)
I really enjoyed your story this week. Thanks for participating in 3WW: it has to get a little old having done it for... uh... LIX weeks. :)
I like the preacher from the Church of Christ. Sorry that I cried when I talked to you last night…
Great story Bone - Too late for the guy to change his ways I think!!
ReplyDeleteThat was a good read Bone - I like stories with room in them for our minds to move about a bit!
ReplyDeleteVery nice again, Bone. I am really glad to see he is getting clean, it's never too late to change one's ways,I hope he continues to stay that way..it will only make her happier in the long run - inspite of the hurts she underwent.
ReplyDeleteSince I'd already done a halloween post, I decided to do something surreal, an on-the-plains dust bowl setting with pizza. I'm posting it now.
ReplyDeleteThis is so boy-who-cried-wolfish to me. So human for them both.
ReplyDeletePia: Thank you. It seems noir is one of my natural inclinations, for some reason.
ReplyDeleteHerb Urban: Thanks. I was definitely hoping to create empathy for both characters.
TC: Thank you. I was trying to show two different sides of the same story.
Cheesy 80's song lyrics are always welcome on this blog, by the way :)
Truefaith: Thanks. It may be too late for "them" but hopefully not him.
Lesley: Thank you. Yeah, I was trying to leave some of it open to the reader's interpretation.
UL: Thank you. I agree. As long as he's still breathing, it's not too late to change.
Sage: Thanks for participating.
Lightheaded: Maybe I could write fables :) Hey wait, didn't that boy get eaten by the wolf?
You're getting so good at this! I will have to stop slacking and start participating again. BTW, you're tagged. Come by for a visit.
ReplyDeleteI think this is one of your best. I like the story line. Feels real to me...
ReplyDeleteMade me sad for him (cause I accidentally read the last paragraph first) until I got to the part where he pulleda knife on her.
3WW's that make you FEEL a certain emotion are always great.
♥
Good story Bone. You always weave the character's emotions so well.
ReplyDeleteHope you have a great weekend and I'm sure you won't be rooting for the Tigers today. :P
Rose
xo
I love how much of this you left open to our interpretations . . . and how you keep us wanting more.
ReplyDeleteAre they husband/wife, girlfriend/boyfriend or father/daughter? Will he find a way to get to her and prove that he's sober? Will love prevail or addiction?
It's difficult, week after week, word grouping after word grouping to keep the fiction fresh and interesting. Thank you for doing such a good job of it.
Bone, I like this short story, it says a lot with so little words. I think Kari is strong and not answering the call is the right thing to do.
ReplyDeleteNice piece, Bone. I like that he is sober now, but I have to wonder at his reasons for phoning in the wee hours of the morning. In light of the "history" you have given us, it makes me still a little suspicious of his motives.
ReplyDeleteYou definitely drew me in, though.
Great story, Bone! It's your story but, my life once upon a time. You done a nice job with this. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteMichelle
I stumbled while using the phone today. No, really, it was so windy, a piece of barn blew in front of me and next thing y'know, I was sittin' on the ground.
ReplyDeleteI love how she's heartbroken just by the sound of the phone because it reminds her of the decision she made to walk away from the pain.
ReplyDeleteEven when the end reveals his change of heart, and it's too late, you still want to go "good girl for standing your ground".
Thank you for this week's challenge, I wasn't ready for what would come from my fingertips.
I love this Bone! Wow...
ReplyDeleteespecially the end... he is finally sober and gets the smack in the face! You can so totally feel both of their pain!
Hope you had a great weekend!
Since I've already commented on your wonderful work, I feel no shame or guilt in simply commenting:
ReplyDeleteI've finally posted.
Love the lyric you choose this week, Bone. The way you wrote the story quickly got me intested in those characters and thier lives. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSomehow, 2:18 am is probably not the best time to call, sober or not... perhaps all the years of drinking damaged a few brain cells so that particular thought was lost on him.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, but I see her side.
wow...a little to late and not ever enough? nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the feedback, guys. I obviously got more than a little behind on responding to comments.
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