"Is a dream a lie if it don't come true, or is it something worse?"
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
3WW #57
Welcome to Three Word Wednesday. Each week, I will post three (or more) words. Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to write something using all of those words. It can be a few lines, a story, a poem, anything.
Leave a comment if you participate. Many fun and interesting people might visit your blog.
This week's words are:
Field
Hide
Second
To most, it's a place that time forgot, with abandoned storefronts and old two story buildings.
To him, it's a bustling town square where a man could take care of any and all business he might have to do in a single day.
To most, it's an overgrown field on the corner, badly in need of mowing.
To him, it's a neatly kept baseball diamond, alive with the sound of kids, including a scrawny but quick shortstop wearing an oversized jersey and a hand-me-down glove that belonged to his grandpa.
To most, it's long overdue for demolition, an eyesore they wish they could hide.
To him, it's the nickel matinee, with all the big stars on the marquee--Gable, Bogart, Hepburn, and Bacall--where he spent every Sunday afternoon for three years.
To most, he's slow and sometimes gets in the way, and he'll talk your head off for an hour if you ever let him get started.
To him, there's no reason to be in a hurry, and the best part of life is the people.
To most, it seems like there will always be plenty of days and years and more time.
But he knows. One second you're ten years old playing shortstop, then you turn around...
"So he walked downtown with his cane pole, looking through the window of what used to be the drugstore. Next to the cafe where he laughed away his life..."
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These were a bit tough, but here's my attempt:
ReplyDeleteFields of Dreams
I continued mine from last week. It's a bit sick, but I like it
ReplyDeleteThis was fun! Thanks for the prompt. Here is my entry:
ReplyDeletehttp://greengrassramblings.blogspot.com/2007/10/3ww-field-hide-second.html
What it isn't--
ReplyDeleteCompetition
.....if you read only one blog this year....take a second and don't hide.....come to the field of my dreams.
ReplyDeleteI've been meditating on what our intrepid Irishman is going to next. Find out here.
ReplyDeleteHad a go but not too happy!
ReplyDeleteclick here
Here is my second contribution to 3ww
ReplyDeletehttp://a-mus-ing.blogspot.com/2007/10/publically-speaking-3ww.html
LOL!!! The Filtering system on the office server has denied access to Pia's blog! Apparently it is a site dealing with the occult! What have you got on there Pia? I'll have to wait until I get home to read it....
ReplyDeletehalcyon
ReplyDeleteHere's me. I am swamped and didn't really have enough time. Sorry....though I loved the prompt.
Here is mine:
ReplyDeleteTulips and Sequoias
The occult? Me. That's hysterical.
ReplyDeleteThis is the edgiest thing I have ever written but it has nothing explicit--other than saying that they're doing something--and I used to read cards but...and I do read my horoscope every day when I remember
I'm back again. This is getting tedious, saying "I'm back" for the second time in a month!
ReplyDeleteAnyway, my post is up.
a poem this week:
ReplyDeleterambling
An entertainment legend fondly remembered in prose and haiku.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.herburban.com/?p=2341
Thanks for the inspiration. I've written two short poems -- a limerick and a haiku.
ReplyDeleteMad Kane
Mine is up.
ReplyDeleteSorry I didn't make it by to visit anybody last week. I had an upsetting call from my vet after I posted on Wednesday, ended up having to put the horse down on Friday... the one I'd bred to be my competition horse. We were supposed to start working together this week. It was a hell of a week last week.
--Gay
I challenged myself a bit this week and not only used Bone's three words, but a writing prompt from Write Stuff, too.
ReplyDeleteAnother dark one - I'm beginning to wonder where all of this darkness is coming from. *grin*
An Imaginary Friend
Here's my entry:
ReplyDelete3WW
or
http://walktotheleft.blogspot.com/2007/10/three-word-wednesday-12.html
Sorry, it's a bit longer than usual.
I Played.
ReplyDeleteGo *HERE* for short poem.
~S
Bone, thanks, as usual.
ReplyDeleteI'm now going to try to create a link to my entry. If it doesn't work I apologize in advance, and will post the poem in toto. If it does, click:
PRACTICE
Here is my entry.
ReplyDeleteI tried again! Thanks!
ReplyDelete3ww Haiku
Hi! I'm a first timer here. Thanks for the prompt :)
ReplyDeletehttp://mariacristina.wordpress.com/2007/10/17/the-pickup-truck-and-3ww/
I'm a little late, but mine for this week is now posted, a meditation of sorts in three parts, inspired by a recent flight: Liminal Space
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great prompt, Bone!
here i am
ReplyDeletehttp://uplatette.wordpress.com/2007/10/18/3ww-9/
let it be written, let it be dun.
ReplyDeleteExpecting mom's whimsy.. I'll just lurk and go to bed early....wait a second. Is that a hidden entry? Over there. In the field! No, the other one.
ReplyDeleteSee. I knew I could knock one out.
Better late than never!
ReplyDeletealpha and omega
Here's mine -
ReplyDeleteWings Soar High
wow am i ever late on this one!!!! but here it is... happy wednesday everyone......
ReplyDelete"thirteen"
I actually finished mine on Wednesday this week, which is unbelievable considering I just posted last week's Monday night.
ReplyDeleteRegardless, I don't think I'll get to anyone's until later tomorrow, but I'll be by to read them all!
Came up with a spooky story.
ReplyDeleteBlood Mother Blog
Did mine in the office using mini font size, and still keen eyes preyed upon my screen.
ReplyDeleteIt's titled Hide
Mine is finally up. I experimented with another poetic form for 3WW words. Hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day.
Michelle
I hope my comment is approves for pia savage. I love your story, Pia!
ReplyDeleteso Im done with another Tina and Mike story...hope this clears up what was going on...back later...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Christine :) It's getting sicker by the week
ReplyDeleteI will be out all day but will comment later
oh nooooo I was so engrossed in my son getting his tooth knocked out that I missed 3ww! grrr...
ReplyDeletenext week I promise... or I will run out to the field and hide my head under second base like an ostridge!
I got mine up this morning, but haven't had time to get back here and post about it!
ReplyDeleteSeems like I say this every week now, but I think this is the most participants we've had. Thank you all and I hope to be around to read your entries Friday.
ReplyDeleteTo us, you made him come alive..
ReplyDeleteTo us, he is very famliar person..
To me, he reminded of my dad...
To you, I thank profusely for this post.
enjoyed the glimpse into his time and place.
ReplyDeletealso great that you maintained style consistency throughout.
Sigh. There is so much to say to this... and yet no way to say it all.
ReplyDeleteFor me personally, I see my grandpa in a lot of it... and my hometown. It seems to me that regardless of who or what you write about, you seem to make it like we were invited to experience it with you.
While it was all wonderful, this in particular got me: To him, it's a neatly kept baseball diamond, alive with the sound of kids, including a scrawny but quick shortstop wearing an oversized jersey and a hand-me-down glove that belonged to his grandpa.
I think it's a timeless piece about an old man looking at a dying town--could be anywhere
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a slow but beautiful film--has that feel to it
Bone, this was a great piece; a very telling image of the passage of time and how quickly life passes us by. I really really like it :o)
ReplyDeleteWOW!...lost for words.
ReplyDeleteSuperb! I wasn't sure you could top last week but you did. Well done. Just curious, but do you have a story in mind when you give us the prompts or do you play after the fact like us? And where do the prompts come from?
ReplyDeleteI walked away from this with tears.
ReplyDeleteGautami: Wow, thanks. That means a lot. I think everyone likes to be told that their character came alive and resonated with readers.
ReplyDeleteJujee: Thank you.
TC: Thanks. That's very nice of you to say. For some reason, I never really thought about it reminding people of someone they knew.
Pia Savage: Thank you. It's rare that my work is called timeless. :)
Pen & The Sword: Thanks! I appreciate the compliment. And welcome to 3WW :)
UL: I hope that's a good thing :)
Jo: Wow, thanks much! No, I always play along just like everyone else. I think it would kind of spoil it otherwise.
For most of the weeks, I've had someone email me three words. But a few times, I've used a website that generates random words.
Avery Laine: It is always amazing and humbling to know something you wrote moved someone to tears. Thank you.
Don't run and hide you almost bride! Just give me a second and I'll field the question!
ReplyDeletehere is my first entry
ReplyDeletehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/3ww/
Bone, this is wonderful - those thoughts are some I might know, some that might live near here. Poignant. Provocative. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteSorry I'm late...this one took awhile to come to me!
ReplyDeletePoppies
Just read your post, Bone...simply beautiful. Aging is so poignant and heartbreaking at the same time...
ReplyDeleteI see several of my older relatives alive in your story. Remarkable piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteLittlewing and Anonymous: Thanks for participating.
ReplyDeleteTumblewords: Oh, thank you for the very kind words.
Fledgling Poet: Thanks. Always look forward to reading your poetry.
Herb Urban: Thank you. I'm glad it brought up thoughts of relatives for several people.
Bone, that was a touching story. It's not often that I come back afterwards to read what you have written, maybe I should do so more often. I will make sure I stay off the baseball idea in mine.
ReplyDeleteits always kinda strange that two people can look at a single picture and see something totally different. nice job!
ReplyDeleteI love it. Great job! I miss the stories that I used to hear from the hospice patients.
ReplyDeleteBone, this was an endearing but, sad story. There is a lesson here for the youth to heed. I loved the way you entwined the past with the present in this story, very effective. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day.
Michelle
I wrote this on Thursday but didn't get a chance to post it until now (this airport terminal has wi-fi).
ReplyDeletehttp://havingwrit.blogspot.com/2007/10/play-ball.html
I'm looking forward to catching up on everyone's entries when I finally get home.
Greetings all, let's hope this works:
ReplyDeleteTHE RAGPICKER'S WEEKEND
Bone, I'm so hopeless, I'm still reading last weeks - yours was terrific. Seems like memories are all thats left - very moving.
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